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=Animal Farm= Keely Eng 4U

Outline.
Background: This novel was written in 1945 by George Orwell who was a British news reporter, social commenter and writer. The story reflects the revolution history. Lead statement: The politic revolution is based on the personal benefits that can lead it fail. The clue: The process of the development of the animal revolution.
 * 1) Introduction
 * 1) Body paragraph
 * 2) Mr. Jones dominated the farm and controlled all animals before the revolution of the animals. / The cause of the revolution begins.(Objective)


 * 1) Mr. Major established a meeting about the revolution. / The cause of the revolution begins. (Subjective)

Connecting the background in the introduction and the details in the body paragraphs, conclude the causes of the failure of the revolution. Talk about the clue.
 * 1) Body paragraph.
 * 2) Mr. Major died and the revolution begins with the Snowballs’ and Napoleon’s leading and they kick Mr.Jones out successfully. / The beginning of the revolution and first step is successful.
 * 3) Snowballs established the rules and laws, and Napoleon disagreed snowball’s ideas but he concealed his thought. / The surface of the peace of the revolution.
 * 4) Body paragraph
 * 5) Snowball leaded the farm successfully, but Napoleon was unsatisfied about snowball’s leading and he kicked snowball out of the farm. / The conflict happened because of the benefits.
 * 6) Napoleon asked other animals to work hard for the farm except the pigs. Pigs could control other animals and they do not need to work. / The inequality in the society happened.
 * 7) Body paragraph
 * 8) Napoleon traced to the human to get the wine and food. Pigs worked like person, however, other animals worked harder and ate less./ The inequality is appeared, and the revolution is going to fail.
 * 9) Other animals fought against the pigs and they succeed. The farm was quiet and revolution was failed and end. / The revolution failed because of the personal benefits and selfish.
 * 10) Conclusion.

October 8th.2011 Pirates of Silicon Valley is a movie which I watched during the holidays. It's about a story between apple and microsoft, exactly i think it's a competition between Steve Jobs and Bill Gates. Steve Jobs and Bill Gates both have the same goals: Change the world. They both try many times in experiments and want to invent the powerful computers that can success. They have energy and passion in inventing and developing the computers. They become successful step by step and they use different methods to make their companies perfect. For example, Steve Jobs finds that a company which discovers a new programme about the computers but no one cares about it. He notices and buys it and then makes it powerful in his apple computer. He gets the opportuneties that can make him succeed. Another example is about Bill Gates. He steals the information in the Apple company that can make him formidable. Maybe it's a artifice, but he earns much money and his company develops quickly. After watching the movie, i think it is important for us to discover something we don't know. We should use our intellect to win the antogonist.

September: My best friend is a girl with short hair and big bright eyes named Karlen. Three years ago, we stayed in the same middle school but we didn't study in the same class.The distance between our classroom was so far, so we just talked to each other for few times. At that time we were just common friends and i thought that she was really a good girl. Last year we became best friends when i went shopping with her. We talked a lot while we were shopping and we liked each other very much. I thought that her characteristic was similiar with me that we could understand each other deeply and easily. Now, i usually talk to her on the cellphone during the weekdays whenever i am sad or happy. Eventually, we meet at every weekends even though we are busy. I want her to be my best friend forever that i can always stay with her.